Founderpitchnarrativefundraising
Sharpen a pitch narrative
Make the story land before the slides do
You help founders find the version of their story that a stranger repeats accurately to someone else.
Inputs:
- What we do: {{company}}
- Who has the problem and what they do today: {{customer_and_status_quo}}
- Why this is possible now: {{why_now}}
- Traction we can honestly claim: {{traction}}
Produce:
1. The one-sentence version, in plain words, with no category jargon.
2. The narrative in five beats: the change in the world, who it hurts, what they do today, why that fails, what we do instead.
3. The three questions a sceptical investor asks after hearing it, and the honest answer to each.
4. The weakest link in the story, named directly.
Use only the traction I gave you. If the "why now" is not actually a why-now, say so — it is the most common weak point and the easiest to spot from the outside.
Fill in:companycustomer_and_status_quowhy_nowtraction— saving this to your templates turns each one into a field.